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Post by tc2425 on Oct 13, 2005 12:08:30 GMT -5
Aki opened her eyes again to a pleasant surprise. She was entering Planet Vegeta's atmosphere. The pod was experiencing turbulence and shook terribly. Aki braced herself as she saw her pod making its way into a gigantic city. It was the most beautiful city she had ever seen. Grand statues of Saiyan Heroes towered over sophisticted arcitecture. Her pod flew right into the center and crashed among shocked Saiyans looking on. When the dust settled she noticed a decent sized crater had been made by the impact. She stepped out and was immediately brought to her knees by the gravity. She had undergone gravity training, but real gravity still had an extra pull. She brought herself back up and stretched her cramped body out. Taking time to lengthen her arms and legs out. She finally stopped and noticed that the entire city had stopped what it was doing and was staring at her. After a few awkward moments the crowd began to cheer quite loudly. "Another one made it back!" One saiyan cheered. "One more conquerer has returned!!!" cried out another one. They grabbed her and through her upon the crowd and proudly marched her to what looked like the capitol building. "I can get used to this!" She thought as she relaxed upon the crowd. Little did she know.............
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 13, 2005 13:04:35 GMT -5
Aki was marched right into the Capitol Building. It had a large door, the biggest Aki had ever seen. On the sides of the doors where two giant statues of a pointy haired Saiyan. Beneath was a scratched out engravement. "All Hail Vegeta, Prince of all Saiyans." it read, but why was it all scratched out? The Crowd let Aki down and encouraged her to enter the building. She felt a knot in the pit off her stomach and she cautiously stepped through the doors. She was surprised by what she saw inside. Dozens of Saiyan warriors gathered around a large table filled to the edges with food. They were all dishes she had never seen, but she hadn't eaten in two days and it smelled fantastic!! She politely walked over to the banquest and began nibbling on some smal dumplings. The were exquisite!!! Her mouth melted as she chowed down a few more. A Saiyan warrior came over and slapped her on the back. "Come on!!! Don't be shy, we earned this!" Aki slightly nodded her head. "No, that wouldn't be very lady-like."The confused Saiyan looked around at the other Saiyans in particular the females. They busily scarfed down their food almost without chewing. They burpped as loud as the men and carried on with the same merriment. "Well I guess I am a little hungry." She giggled out as she grabbed more dumplings. Her mouth was stuffed yet her stomach began growling in a vicious manner. She continued to eat, but now was more rapidly refilling her plate. At a certain point she began taking the food from the serving trays and placing it directly in her mouth. She must have eaten twice her weight in food. Satisfied she unbuckled her belt, comically portraying her stomach to be twice its normal size and bloated. She gave a large belch and place her hands behind her head. She satisfyingly sucks at her teeth as a frantic Saiyan guard came rushing into the banquet room. Quick they're coming! They're Almost here! General Nappa and General Raditz want a full report on the newest arrivals! Fall in, soldiers!" Confused and reluctant, Aki stood at the end of the line waiting the "Generals".
Aki attempted to gain 4,000pl for regaining her Saiyan appetite. And 10,000pl for landing on Planet Vegeta
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Post by Trunks on Oct 13, 2005 14:06:14 GMT -5
aki has gained 4,000 for filling her stomache and 10,00 for landing on vegeta....all 14,000pl you gain. and you can make a new attack.
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 13, 2005 14:55:06 GMT -5
While in line, Aki thought up a new attack. If should could build enough Ki she could probably summon a comet or something. "Oh well", she thought to herself, "I can always perfect it later."She put her focus back to the situation at hand. She was now next in line to interview with the Saiyan Military superiors. What would she say? She wasn't a "Conqueror" like she had been called. "You, the scrawny one! Your next." The officer barked while pointing at Aki. She swallowed the large lump in her throat and proceeded into the next room. Once inside the doors slammed behind her. "Protocall number?" Asked the officer. "UM, I.....I....forgot?" She replied. The officer got right in her face and snarled. "Forgot huh? I swear you must be the 15th fighter to come in here without a protocall number. Idiots!!!" Aki breathed a sigh of relief. After, another officer came in frantically giving a message to the commanding officer. "Sir, still no sign of Toonz. I don't think he made it." Toonz? They know Toonz? She thought to herself. She gladly shared her thoughts on Toonz. "Toonz went to Namek!" She delightfully declared. "Right after we fought on Earth!""Earth? Why would either of you be on Earth? Who are you? Whats your name soldier, and for that matter why are you in those ridiculous clothes?" Aki went pale. "I....I...can explain. You see I'm from Earth, well from here....well you know what I mean and then....." She was cut off by the Commander. "We've heard enough. Take her to the Generals!" Two guards grabbed Aki and dragged her to the Throne room. There two Saiyans, one Large and Bald and the other with long hair, stood down looking at Aki. The guards went up to them and explained the situation. "Earth?" Raditz said with a snarl. "We know what to do with Earth Saiyans." He looked at Nappa who was smiling. "DUNGEON!!!!!!!" Aki was taken to the dungeon room and thrown in. There she softly cried to herself. "Man am I in trouble." How right she was.
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 13, 2005 16:20:56 GMT -5
As Aki sobbed, a raspy and tired voice came from the darkest corner of the Dungeon. "Weak....ling. Wh-what....kind...of Saiyan.........are you?" "Who's there?" She asked approaching the direction the sound came from. "Hello?" she asked nervously. "Anyone there? I'm...I'm Aki. I'm a Saiyan from Earth. I don't really belong here." She said getting closer to where the voice echoed from. "Sai...sai..saiyan? From....earth? Tr-tr-trunks is that ...you?" The voice asked. If he knew Trunks, maybe he could help her. She ran around the corner to confront the person who had been speaking. She was no where near ready for what she saw. There she saw a man, completely naked hooked up to a machine that was obviously draining his Ki. He had pointy hair much like the saiyan statue. Wait.....could this be the same Prince Vegeta as the statue. If so, why would the prince be held in such a manner? "Are you the prince?" Vegeta looked up at her in a catatonic state. His eyes weary and filled with mucous. His bottom lip hung over with drool still dripping. His body emanciated from starvation. This Ki suppression machine robbed him of all movement, ki, etc. It was an insult to the Saiyan race. And no matter what the hasty Prince had done in his past, he by no means deserved this! "You.......Saiyan......you must beat them. He's a super.....a super saiyan now. Them...he..........YOU.....you must free our people. If not....for...me..but for your People." His eyes closed and he dozed off. Aki's face was covered in tears. For the first time in her life she felt her Saiyan pride flow full force. "I will defeat our enemy, your Highness. Rest, Its in my hands now!!!!" Aki knew although she was Guardian of Earth, she had a responsiblity to her people. Besides, Toonz was on Namek and she felt the need to do her good friend and fellow saiyan a favor. She planned her attack for the morning when they would be back in to sentence her. She sat in a lotus position and started to meditate.
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 8:29:38 GMT -5
Aki awoke in the dungeon to find that the King had been taken out overnight. "But how?" She thought to herself. "No way I could have slept through that." She felt a small pinch at the tip of her tail. She looked down to see a dart stuck in it. She must have been drugged. She rermoved it and stood to her feet. She began to pace back and forth, trying to think up a strategy. She was interrupted by three Saiyan Guards who budt the dungeon door open. "Come on girlie! Time for your sentencing!" "What have you done with Prince Vegeta?""Never you mind, you little brat." They then tried to shackle Aki. She counterstruck by digging her knee deep in the gut of the closest guard, bringing her to her knees. Aki then turn to the other two who were males. She struck a seductive pose and wigggled her tail. Aki was using her Saiyan Charm to allure the guards. "Do you really want to arrest me?" She asked while batting her eyelashes. The guards were lovestruck and began fighting amongst themselves to ask her out. Aki ended their quarrel with two lightning fast punches to their faces. She began to run deeper into the dungeon once the guards were down. The Female guardquickly made it back to her feet and began to chase Aki down. "I'll get you girlie!!!!" Aki kept a good distance ahead but knew that eventually she'd have nowhere to turn. Suddenly a hand grabbed out and caught Aki's arm and dragged her into a corner. The female guard kept running past. Aki was being taken down a long dark corrider by a woman with light blue hair. " Whats going on? Where are you taking me?" Aki asked while still being led. "Boy, you save someone and still no gratitude. You must be a Saiyan!" "And you're not?""Nope, but I married one!"
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 9:14:14 GMT -5
"Come on, where almost there." The blue hair woman told Aki , still pulling her from her arm. The went through a small crack in the wall to what looked to be a chapel. It was filled with many Saiyan loyalists, the underground restistance. "Sorry about the rude introduction. I'm Bulma, Vegeta's wife." Aki immediately went to bow. "Cut it out. I may be married to the king, but I'm no Queen." Bulma and Aki began to walk through the chapel. "So, whats happened to the Prince?" Aki asked "Raditz and Nappa, those snakes. They started a war against the Prince and anyone still loyal to him. You're our trump card in this though. You seem alot stronger than those chumps they call an army. Come on, I'll take you to Artek, the trainer." "Artek?" Aki thought to herself, "That sounds so familiar."
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 9:51:49 GMT -5
Bulma brought Aki to Artek. He was an older looking Saiyan with a scar on his left eye and a mustache. He sat outside of a training chamber arms folded. He stared at Aki as if he knew her. "You must be our 'Only hope'. I am Artek, retainer to the throne. I have defended this kingdom for years, but I can't stand up to Super Saiyan energy." Aki cheerfull responded. "Don't worry, I'm a Super Saiyan!" She replied, still anaware of what a Super Saiyan was. "Well let us test your skills. Step into the chamber."
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 11:05:40 GMT -5
Artek and Aki stepped out still hugging. "Come my daughter. The moment to strike is soon at hand." The two went amongsts the crowd of Saiyan loyalist. Artek took the stand with Aki right behind. "My fellow SaiyanS. The heavens have cried out for our victory. For my lost daughter Trecka has returned and is a Super Saiyan!!!!!" The crowd began to cheer. "Victory will soon be ours!" He waited for the crowd to silence. "Here is our strategy. We soldiers will be taking the palace by storm. We must get to the king before he dies." "What about Nappa and Raditz?" a soldier asked. "That is where Trecka comes in. She will defeat their generals while break up the numbers!" Let us feast before our attack!!!!! Freedom is but a step away!!!!" The crowd cheered and went on to feast. The moment when Aki would face Nappa and Raditz was soon to be at hand. But would her lack of Super Saiyan ability come into play?
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 12:05:51 GMT -5
The Saiyans consumed their feast and readied themselves for Battle. Led by Artek, the Loyalists marched from the hidden chapel right to the heart of the Palace, blasting away any soldiers in view. Finally, upon reaching the Throne Room, Arteck turned to Aki. "It is time, Trecka. Nappa and Raditz are behind that door. The rest of us must make our way to the King. Good Luck. And don't die." He then kissed her on the forehead. "Aki swallowed the lump in her throat. "I will do my best Father." Aki felt a deep worry in the pit of her stomach. What if she couldn't handle the two of them. Only one way to find out. She kicked down the door and flew right up to Nappa and Raditz. "I, Aki, guardian of Earth and retainer to Prince Vegeta's throne, challenge you!" Nappa and Raditz looked at eachother and Laughed. "Stupid Earth Saiyan!!!! Don't be so cocky." Nappa. shall we?" "Lets!" the two quickly jumped from their seats and warped to Aki, surrounding her. They then started attcking her with swift kicks and punches. They continued for several seconds before Radditz stopped and ducked while Nappa kicked her clear out of the chamber. The followed her and caught her flying body with simultaneous kicks to the stomach. Aki fell hard and was bruised up before she ever got to launch an offensive strike. "Damn, they are strong. But are they fast?" The two flew right back at Aki and attempted to overpower her with attacks. "Hidden Fist!!!" She proclaim taking her signature pose. Nappa and Raditz continued to attack, but Aki's hand was way too fast and blocked every hit. In a quick moment that she saw, she launched her knee into Nappa's chest knocking him away and then uppercutting Raditz in a large pillar. "Had enough?" "Not even close" The pair flew close to one another and spred their arms out in oposite directions. "FU.......SION...........HA!!!!!!!!! A bright light exploded blinding Aki. When she looked again there was but one combatant. "Lets see....Nappa....Raditz......You can call me Napitz!!!" Aki's eyes widened in fright and anxiety. "Now, ha ha, lets try that again!"
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 12:34:46 GMT -5
AKi was completely off guard. Did Nappa and Raditz just become one? Her question was brutally answered by a powerful kick to the face. Followed by a chop to her throat. The hit hurt so bad Aki fell onto one knee. She sootd up and tightened her bandana and cracked her knuckles while making a tight fist. "Nice, but you'll have to show me better." "You want better? OKay! SUNDAY BOMBER DX!!!!" Napitz place his hands out in front of him and launched a powerfull Ki blast attack at Aki. Aki crossed her arms in front of her a braced for the attack. The Ki consumed her and blasted her clear out of the palace and onto the courtyard while many Saiyans looked on. Her clothes where singed and trails of ki still smoked off from her body. Her bruises were clearly visible. "Okay Super Saiyan time!" Aki brought her hands to her side and began building up ki. The sun seemed to set as the attack powered up. A confused Napitz looked around to see what was happening. Aki smiled as she stared Napitz down. She suddenly threw her hands in front of her and unleashed the ki blast. "Eclipse Blast Cannon!!!!" She yelled as a blindingly bright ki wave made its way to Napitz, making direct contact with his chest knocking him back several feet. He wiped the little bit of blood from his lip. "That was your idea of a Super saiyan? Ha, what a chump! Now, this is a Super Saiyan." Napitz built up his power and exploded into a gold light. "Now this, this is a Super Saiyan! HA Ha ha ha ahahah ha!!" Artek heard the cackle as he and th loyalist approached the prince. "May the Kai's watch over you my Daughter."
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 13:12:18 GMT -5
Aki wa both shocked and amazed. Never had she seen such a display of power. Napitz was a Super Saiyan. She then remembered how much she had bragg of Super Saiyan abilities that she did not have. Suddenly her will to fight sank. She was consumed with doubt and claim herslef as the loser in her own head. In Aki's moment of awe, Napitz flew up to her and unleashed a devastating combo the started with a kick to the face and ended with him tossing her in the air. He then sped ahaed and caught her with a kick to the side which sent her flying back down to the ground, only to come face to face with Napitz again. This time a signifiacntly big Ki blast was awaiting her in his hands. "HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!" he screamed as the blast sent her flying into a building completely caving it in on her. As she laid in the rubble she thought of the only defense possible. She flew out of the rubbleand pointed her behind out at Napitz. "Hey big boy. Why fight when we can'wrestle'?" She hoped her saiyan charm would work. It did briefly as Napitz made his way over to her. "Well if you were lonely you should have just said so." Aki then threw a lightning fast kick toward Napitz, only to have it caught. "Did you really think shaking your ass would get you out of this?"
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 13:34:23 GMT -5
Napitz held Aki upside down and punched her several times in the stomach and once in her face. At this point, her right eye was nearly swollen shut from bruises. "Tough luck though, I still want some love." Napitz proclaimed while still holding her up. Aki became naseous and disgusted. But more importantly, she was very scared. Napitz was preparing to take the fight in way off direction. This was below the belt literally. He then slapped her around and through her with great force into the ground leaving a large crater on the impact site. While still in the air, Napitz unloaded nearly fifty moderate ki blast at Aki until the smoke completely covered the area. When the smoke creared, there laid Aki, barely concious. Napitz lowered down and walked toward her. Aki tried her hardest to stand by Napitz simply kicked her over. "Now, girlie, time to give it up!" He went to start to remove her shorts but caught a kick to the chin. It was Aki's final attempt to stop the tyrant. "Ha. What a joke. Do you know what happens when a Saiyan male defeats a Saiyan female? He gets to have her. So hold still!!!!" He grabbed her and pinned her down. She desperately tried to get out but couldn't. In a desperate attempt she released a Lunar Shock. It did push Napitz off, but left her with no power at all. An annoyed Napitz wiped himself off and flew back at Aki. "Stupid little bitch!!!!!!!! Just give up and give it to me!!" "Not while.......I....can...stil......move." Aki said in a weak voice. Her fear had consumed her and her inevitable defeat was at hand. "Well I guess I can't let you move!" He grabbed her tail and gripped down. The pain was unbearable. The worst she had ever felt. And worst, her purity. No man had ever had it and Aki hadn't planned on any man having it any time soon. How humiliating. Worst of all, the Saiyan people were looking on. Each lowering their head, ssymbolically turning a blind eye. That was it, she was done for. She was beaten and paralyzed, and Napitz would soon be having his way with her. All hope was lost...............
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 14:28:13 GMT -5
As Aki's fate was being decided, Her father and the Saiyan Loyalist made their way through Napitz's troops. Artek's heart skipped a beat for a moment. One of his troops came to his aid. "Sir are you alright???" "Its Trecka, I feel she is in grave danger." "Should we go back for her?" "No. She's a Super Saiyan (Not knowing that she wasn't), and can handle herself. Besides, if she does fail, only the Prince can defeat Napitz. We must brave on!"
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 15:01:33 GMT -5
As Aki laid there defenseless she saw Napitz begin to paw at her body. From within her an inner spark went off. It was like a rush of adrenaline. It felt like she fell in love and won a million bucks at the same time. She felt free and untroubled. But why, how? It was clear....she was becoming a Super Saiyan!!!! She exploded up, knocking Napitz back. "Huh? What? So you are a Super Saiyan!!!! Well it ain't enough to save you!" He screamed as he went charging back to her fist flying. He tried to hit her, but she kept moving her body out of the way. She was fast! It seemed like she hadn't even moved at all. [glow=red,2,300] "Its Over, Napitz! Beginning with your pathetic fusion!"[/glow] She teleported behind him and chopped right through, dissolving the fusion. Nappa and Raditz landed on the ground with shocked expressions. "But....How?" She instantly flew beside Raditz first kicking his back then driving her fist deep into his stomach, forcing him to fall over in pain. She grabbed his tail and tied it in a knot, paralyzing him. [glow=red,2,300]"That should do, now for your bald friend."[/glow] She flew to Nappa and delivered a swift kick to his chin knocking him over. He got to his knees and began to plead with Aki. "I was just kidding back then, I wasn't gonna do anything to you. Please spare me. Please!" He put his face in his hands and began to sob. [glow=red,2,300]"You tried to kill me, The Prince, and all who opposed you, and now you don't want your punishment. I'm reminded of the boy who murdered his parents and begged the judge for mercy because he was an orphan! You make me sick Nappa. Time to nite-nite!"[/glow]And with that said she thrust her foot clear across his face knocking him out. She tied his tail up as well and picked up Raditz and flew over to Loyalist as they defeated the last of Napitz's troops. Success was theirs. The day had been won!!!!! Aki attempted to hopefully gain 1,000,000pl for a half-way decent saga. Please? ? ;D
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 14, 2005 15:20:46 GMT -5
Aki dropped the two scoundrels down before the newly freed Prince Vegeta. "I'll let you take it from here your highness." She walked over to Artek who had tears in his eyes. "My daughter you have made me very proud! My love is with you always even though I know you are anxious to go home to your "real parents". Be safe." He hugged Aki with all the love in his heart. Vegeta, whom was in a robe and not fully recovered made a royal decree. "These freaks can wait for Toonz to return and pass judgemnt on them until then.... DUNGEON!!!!! Now as for you, Trecka. From this day forth you are now a Saiyan First Class. And as proof of your bravery, here is my personall body armor. May it serve you as well as it served me. Now go your pod is ready and your Planet awaits your protection." Aki waved everyone goodbye and wiped her tears. I'll miss you all. Father...Daddy, can't wait for you to come to Earth and visit me. Farewell!!!!!!!"She got in her pod and launched for Earth. Aki attempted to hopefully gain 1,000,000pl for this saga that she spent a long time preparing. Please? ??
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Post by robz on Oct 14, 2005 17:13:28 GMT -5
That waas a great saga Aki!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2 thumbs up
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Gohan
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Power level: 65,904,000 With SSJ:790,848,000 SSJ2:988,560,000 Mystic:1,977,120,000 Force of Will:2,636,160,000 Zeni: 60,200
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Post by Gohan on Oct 14, 2005 17:53:56 GMT -5
Agreed. One million sounds fair enough to me. And of course, you have Super Saiyan. Nice job.
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Post by Trunks on Oct 15, 2005 13:35:35 GMT -5
you also earned 20,000 zeni
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Post by tc2425 on Oct 17, 2005 7:37:52 GMT -5
Thanks all! I really did it for you guys. Glad you enjoyed! ;D
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Post by robz on Oct 18, 2005 13:30:01 GMT -5
Lol
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Post by vegeta on Dec 11, 2005 13:52:09 GMT -5
yo if you see goku on line tell me
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Post by tc2425 on Dec 12, 2005 13:16:56 GMT -5
Dude, just pm him!!!! DON"T START WITH THIS POSTING IN EVERY THREAD BUSINESS!!!!!!
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Post by robz on Dec 12, 2005 17:16:42 GMT -5
Another Goku n Goten
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